The most widely recognized phrase in the United
States right now isn't the Nike slogan, Just Do It, like many people believe;
it's "Made in China". This has become a phrase that's common in every
household across the U.S. Everything from phones to jeans are now imported from
China. This transition to a country that imports more than 20% of its $2.3
trillion worth of imports from China, has happened because many Chinese goods
are being sold for the same price or even less than it costs to produce it. This
low cost has caused an enormous shift to companies buying Chinese made
products. However this low cost is deceiving. The post production costs of
these goods are almost never factored in.
Consider safety for example, as recently as 2007
China was importing toys and other products with lead paint. While lead paint
has been banned from household paints since 1978 because even a small amount of
lead can kill a person, the U.S. was still allowing deadly lead paint into
households across the nation. In 2007 however this issue of lead paint made
front page news and a recall of over 19 million toys was made.
Another example of safety is with Chinese food.
Ontaskva.com gives an example of a popular noodle house in Shanghai. A man saw
men coming in with bags one day and when he asked what they were, they replied
that they were bags of salt used to make the noodles. The man saw chemical
names listed as ingredients and so he wrote them down and went home to
investigate what they were. This Chinese noodle house was using road salt used
to de-ice roads during snow storms in U.S. cities, not suitable for
consumption.
The post production costs became
painfully evident for California when it decided to renovate the San-Francisco Bay
Bridge. The state opted for saving money by buying from Chinese steel fabricators.
These savings quickly eroded when problems with the steel such as faulty welds
by a Chinese steel fabricator caused extremely costly delays. Costly over-runs
aren’t the only worry about buying from Chinese steel producers however. In 2011,
inferior materials have caused six bridges to collapse in China. This is
worrying as the Verazano-Narrows Bridge in New York is going to be renovated
using $34 worth of Chinese steel and steel work.
Christian, your topic is an interesting one. Unfortunately, you make several writing mistakes. Here are a couple:
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"Consider safety for example, as recently as 2007 China was importing toys and other products with lead paint." This is a run-on sentence, and I think you mean "exporting" and not "importing."
There is one other issue that I want you to consider. You cite the Ontaskva.com source, which is good. However, I am unsure where you got the statistics from in your first paragraph. When you write your research paper, it will be very important for you to cite all of your information. In addition, you might want to address why your sources are credible. What is the Ontaskva.com source? Is this a credible news agency? I have never heard of it.