The simplest definition of a democracy is “government by the
people”. This is a system of government where citizens have a voice and a vote
in government policies and in electing the people that represent them. For a democracy
to work at its simplest level the citizens must be formally educated to understand,
participate in and maintain generations of democracy. Democracy also enables
people to overcome barriers, both social and economic and achieve their
greatest potential that may have been stifled by a different form of
government.
Prior to educational reforms in the mid-1800s most poor or
middle class people could not afford the luxury of a private education. A full
democracy cannot be supported when only a minority of its citizens is educated.
To improve this country, educational reformers started public schools supported
by taxes so the average man could be educated and therefor better qualified to
participate in and understand the true nature of democracy.
Public education is much more than just learning to read and
write; it supports a huge social structure. Children attend school five days a week,
six hours a day, taught by qualified teachers with planned lessons. School also
helps children develop the social skills they need as adults. Learning to get
along with others, sharing, speaking up, voicing opinions, developing
relationships and challenging themselves are all skills needed to maintain a
democracy. As students advance in their education they learn how to act around
one another. In the first grade a young boy may cry when he does not know how
to solve a math problem. But, as he advances through his schooling he matures
by being with his peers and realizes that crying over a math answer is not an
acceptable reaction. He now has the advanced skills to ask a teacher for help. The
ability to know when to seek help is a lifelong skill.
The United States is seen as a strong democracy around the
world. It strives to have its citizens have high literacy rates and test scores
in order to compete with other countries. The US works very hard to be able to
compete in the world market where education and innovation are essential to
stay ahead. Without helping each and every citizen in every state go to school
and complete a high school education the US could easily fall behind. It would
be a shame to lose public education and only have the elite be able to attend
schools because no democracy can thrive without giving each of its citizens the opportunity to be educated.
Emily, this post is strong. You write very well, and you bring up some important points about the relationship between democracy and education. I particularly like your second paragraph, in which you trace the history of public education.
ReplyDeleteI have only two real criticisms for you. First, look at this sentence: "Children attend school five days a week, six hours a day, taught by qualified teachers with planned lessons." This violates parallel structure for several reasons. Additionally, it is just an awkward sentence. Second, I am not sure the crying boy is the best analogy. You seem to attribute the boys maturity to a democratic education. Would the boy not mature naturally? Would he not mature in a more totalitarian state? I love that you try to find an analogy. Oceane, Micaela, and Julia have also used analogies to make their point. In future responses, you might spend a bit more time finding a more appropriate one.