In 1984, Madonna
produced the single hit “Borderline” which is her first single to ever become a
top ten hit. In the video, Madonna is
the main character and she is caught in a situation between doing what she wants
to do and doing what her boyfriend wants her to do. Madonna is asked to model
for a photographer and chooses to do so against her boyfriends will. Madonna’s
dilemma embodies a general teenage truth that love can be complex and difficult.
The intent of the music video is to entertain her audience, which consists of
mostly teenage girls, and to show that guys are not in charge and girls should
be able to make their own decisions. Throughout
the video, Madonna shows her view on the situation which is that the girl needs
to please herself and do what she wants. This is shown when Madonna chooses to
model because she wants to and she will not be held back by a boy.
Madonna achieves her
intent by showing that she has power in the relationship and her power is displayed
in many different ways. Madonna does not need her boyfriend because there are
other guys that are interested in her like the photographer. This serves as a
warning to the boyfriend that says if he does not treat her properly, she will
leave him to be treated better. Madonna’s intent is strengthened by this point
because she is shown in the position of power and can control the outcome of
their relationship which was traditionally dominated by men. Madonna also shows
her power by “playing hard to get”. In the video, Madonna is talking with her
friends and not worrying about her boyfriend. She does not go chasing after him
trying to make things better, he comes to her. Once again, Madonna shows she is
content with not being in a relationship with her boyfriend and that he has to
make things better. This only adds on to Madonna’s power in the relationship
because she shows her independence. Lastly, Madonna adds to her power by being glamorous.
Being glamorous makes any woman feel special which can replace the need for a
man. This builds on Madonna’s independence which relates to power. The glamor
aspect of Madonna’s video also helps her purpose of entertaining her audience.
Madonna attempts to catch the interest of her audience by wearing “hip” or “flashy”
clothes and riding around in fast cars. Being fashionable captures an audience’s
attention and Madonna is fashionable to say the least.
Madonna is unarguably
one of the greatest pop stars of her time. Through her music, Madonna attempts to
instill power and independence in woman often by portraying herself as a glamor
queen and a prize to be won. Entertaining
her audience is important for Madonna, like any other artist and she does this
through a variety of different methods such as being glamorous or, like Oceane
said, being controversial.
Denis, this is good. You write a legitimate, convincing analysis. Most impressively, you write this analysis without making the act of analyzing explicit. I feel like you are casually explaining the rhetorical intent of the video. I don't have too many suggestions to make this stronger.
ReplyDeleteThe only slightly awkward part of the response is your explanation of Madonna's intent. I get the sense that you were conflicted as to whether the intent was to entertain or "to instill power and independence in woman." The latter seems to be a more logical conclusion, based on your argument. I might consider avoiding all of the references to entertainment. I found the argument about power and independence much more convincing.
I do selfishly wish you had addressed some of the song lyrics in your analysis. What is the "borderline"?
Regardless, this is a strong post. You should be happy with it.